# LMD Async Tutoring

**URL:** https://discuss.criticalfallibilism.com/t/lmd-async-tutoring/1933
**Category:** Tutoring
**Created:** [April 23, 2024, 12:05am UTC](https://discuss.criticalfallibilism.com/t/lmd-async-tutoring/1933 "2024-04-23T00:05:39Z")
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### Author: ![LMD](https://discuss.criticalfallibilism.com/user_avatar/discuss.criticalfallibilism.com/lmd/32/3213_2.png) [@LMD](https://discuss.criticalfallibilism.com/u/LMD)
#### Post date: [August 15, 2024, 2:54am UTC](https://discuss.criticalfallibilism.com/t/lmd-async-tutoring/1933/544 "2024-08-15T02:54:24Z")

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Okay, from The Goal by Eli Goldratt:

> I go in and take a seat. Peach is standing at the far end of the table. A slide projector sits in front of him. He’s starting to talk. A clock on the wall indicates it’s exactly eight o’clock.

so:

> [1] I go in and take a seat.

> [2] Peach is standing at the far end of the table.

> [3] A slide projector sits in front of him.

> [4] He’s starting to talk.

> [5] A clock on the wall indicates it’s exactly eight o’clock.

Okay. It seems to me there is a main thing happening in the paragraph, and then there are details that describe the scene. I’ve never done a fiction paragraph before, so I’m not sure what the main node could be.

[1] I think is the main thing happening. He is going into a room and taking a seat. The rest describes the room/scene he is entereing.

So it seems like a lot of the sentences are answering questions that better paint the picture of the scene?

 ![Screenshot 2024-08-15 at 12.53.21 PM](https://discuss.criticalfallibilism.com/uploads/default/original/2X/7/70999c7ddfa6618e3ef0e08f518033e8924dd95c.png)

time ~10mins

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