In general I’d make a node for the semi-colon and treat it like a conjunction root node that joins the two clauses.
Don’t put quotation marks (") around text and also blockquote it, unless it actually had quotation makes in the original. You’ve added two types of quoting which makes it look like a quote of dialog or a quote of a quote.
The “even” part is tricky so I’m going to assign it for @lmd to try. @lmd what would you put as the parent and children for “even” here and why?
There’s an error somewhere else not related to “even”. Look around and see if you can find it @Eternity. Looks like you’re getting these mostly right.