Okay, from The Goal by Eli Goldratt:
I go in and take a seat. Peach is standing at the far end of the table. A slide projector sits in front of him. He’s starting to talk. A clock on the wall indicates it’s exactly eight o’clock.
so:
[1] I go in and take a seat.
[2] Peach is standing at the far end of the table.
[3] A slide projector sits in front of him.
[4] He’s starting to talk.
[5] A clock on the wall indicates it’s exactly eight o’clock.
Okay. It seems to me there is a main thing happening in the paragraph, and then there are details that describe the scene. I’ve never done a fiction paragraph before, so I’m not sure what the main node could be.
[1] I think is the main thing happening. He is going into a room and taking a seat. The rest describes the room/scene he is entereing.
So it seems like a lot of the sentences are answering questions that better paint the picture of the scene?
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