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I wanna talk about my project attempt #1 to find more ideas for success criteria:

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Im also reading this quote like if youre better yesterday than today then thats not better for u today.

Is there a better word than “like” here? I’m thinking i could find a better word but I think the problem is my use of “this” before “quote.” I didnt want to be repetitive and use “this” again after “like”. I ended up leaving the word “like” by itself to describe the rest of the words in the sentence. I think I could get better at using more definite determiners like “the.” I think the audience probably wouldve understood what quote I was referring to.

I think finding words that I could improve on could be a success criteria. Like, find words that can be phrased better. When I asked if there’s a better word than “like,” that counts as finding a word that can be phrased better.

I think another success criteria could be: find potential reasons why I wrote a certain word or phrase. I may not find exactly why i wrote a certain word or phrase but I can get some good ideas about it.